Stephen!
This is truly the best work I’ve seen from you. I loved the attention to detail in the cave and when you were describing the vast difference between the characters =D
I also liked how you had Starr meet up with Lucen before he just blindly chased after him into the cave. It’s a better idea to have the reader start to develope feeling for the characters before they mourn for their almost passing.
I don’t know what else to say… other than I really want to read the rest!!!
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Stephen!
This is truly the best work I’ve seen from you. I loved the attention to detail in the cave and when you were describing the vast difference between the characters =D
I also liked how you had Starr meet up with Lucen before he just blindly chased after him into the cave. It’s a better idea to have the reader start to develope feeling for the characters before they mourn for their almost passing.
I don’t know what else to say… other than I really want to read the rest!!!
<3Megan
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